Well... were you watching some horror/gore movie before this and just decided to write this? I mean, it's not bad... but it seriously reminds me of Saw. I have no idea what else you are writing though, so I don't want to judge to much as I don't know the rest of your... uh... I'll just say story. I mean, I've just started writing and I get some pretty crappy and mean responses so don't get discouraged! Keep writing pal ;)
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