HELP, COMPETITION... PLEASEEE!! to win a bates saddle?

None of those are very good. It's a horse magazine looking for someone to promote their Maggie even more, so you have to play to what their looking for. You have to make it both heartfelt with allot of detail but also say how all their products and advertisements are good. A few key words could be: Useful, amazing, easy, entertaining, my number-one horse magazine, better then the rest, All that and more, worth it every penny, etc.